Final Editing - 2 - font and placement of font
The majority of our peers dislike our chosen font as it looked too chunky and messy, and looked quite childish. This effected the title sequence as a whole, as it lightened the tone of the plot. To keep the seriousness of the narrative, we would need to choose a neater font that still feels dystopian in appearance. We eventually decided on using Wrong Time, Wrong Place:
Our peers also felt that the main title should instead be nearer to the middle of the sequence rather than the end:
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FIRST DRAFT |
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FINAL TITLE |
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